Rate My Yugioh Deck PLEase!!!?

Im not really an expert on these type of decks so I would try and correct your monster line up too much. But I definately see ways that you can help this deck already just by skimming through your spell and trap sections. First off Call of the Haunted is banned, so you can replace it with Premature Burial. Secondly, Negate Attack and Waboku both arent very good, you are losing 1 card while your opponent loses none, you should replace them with a Mirror Force and a second Sakuretsu Armor. If you cant obtain a Mirror Force just go for 3 Sakuretsu Armor's its not limited. Also your deck count in itself is a bit high, reduce it to 40-42 cards. It may not seem like a bit difference but it can be crucial. Replace Nobleman of Crossout with Shield Crush. You should add in a Marshmallon and possible Treeborn Frog/ Snipe Hunter as well, Especially Snipe Hunter with this given deck list. I would take out something for Bottomless Trap Hole also. Overall I think this is a pretty good deck, I like the Zoma/Metal Reflect Slime with Mage Power. But like I said I dont know as much about dark decks so you may want to find someone to help you with your monsters a bit more in depth than what Ive said.