What Is There To Love? Will you comment?

The poem is too long for you not to let the reader not now what's going on. Even after I got through two stanza I still had no idea what you were talking about. Especially the second stanza, it needs to be less wordy (think do you want it to be short and powerful or long and lyrical). You need to expand on that line 'Is my time left to be lived as cripple' its a good piece of imagery but you can't just put imagery like that in without a progression to it. I liked the last two stanzas it tied everything together well.