Thursday, December 15, 2011

Is my story too much like harry Potter?

umm.... dont include the forbidden forest or call it something else, thats in hp. and also i wouldnt make like some random dude just pop out of nowhere telling her shes a witch and shes gonna go to this school because its uncreative and rushes the story way fast. you should like make the girl notice that overtime as she ages shes developing magical powers and then make her grandmother or someone tell her everything about it and about the school and all that.

No comments:

Post a Comment